For my audience feedback a asked a few people to watch my rough-cut and write down anything that may have been out of place or just didn't work with the story line. I also asked them to tell me what they thought about the story-line.
Positive feedback : One of the things that worked very well was the the locations used . It made the artist relateable to every single woman who may have experienced the same thing .
Having some scenes shot in her home also makes the video allot more intimate and personal.
The camera angles and movement is good as well as the.
establishment of the artist very good.
establishment of the artist very good.
Negative feedback : More shots of the artist singing would be better
The story line isn't as clear as it could be. Since the song is called superman maybe use some clips from a super man movie just short clips
Camera is little shaky in some shots (maybe stabilize in movie or re-film the scenes )
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